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Fiolee by Cocoismynumber1food

Marshall's P.O.V

"Hey cat, do you like fireflies?" 

I watched the cats ears twitch my direction

"I, guess... why...?"

perfect answer cupcake

"Wanna see one now?"

I looked at her face, hopefully i'll get the response and reaction I want

"What do you mean Marsha.... DON'T YOU DARE VAMPIRE!!!!"

Her face went from confused to furious, my cue

"Bingo!"

I sped straight in front of Fionna, softly and slowly stroking my fingers down her neck and stretching my face closer to her ear

"Hot all over yet?"

I didn't even have to look to know she was red, anyone else would think she's caught a cold! hah!

And that's when I kissed her

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Fionna's P.O.V

I am hot all over

I could still feel his warm breath around my ear as he kissed me

He pulled back for a second, only to say

"Taste the rainbow my little rabbit"


MORE TO COME

Yea I know...
It's finally back and I'm only teasing you ><!

I wont ask you to be patient cause you've waited long enough ^~^
LOL

Anywecks...
Enjoy .3.
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:iconsoulstar1999:
SoulSTAR1999 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
please continue please continue, it is amazing I love it Love Rainbrony okie 
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digitalbird06 Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
puppy eyes hidan icon  more?
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digitalbird06 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
AHHHH! Taste the Rainbow my little Rabbit! LOVE IT! Please update me when you have completed another chapter
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digitalbird06 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2014
So wait, is the Sweet Truth supposed to be the second chapter to this story, or an entirely different one?
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:iconcocoismynumber1food:
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's different, and Stracon is strawberry flavored bacon
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digitalbird06 Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
hmmm strawberry bacon, is it good?
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:iconcocoismynumber1food:
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dunno, I'll have to try it myself! xD
I just made it up for the story, but I'l really have to try it xD
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digitalbird06 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
really? I thought it was a real thing
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:iconcocoismynumber1food:
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Guess I had some pretty sweet realism then, huh? xD
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:icondigitalbird06:
digitalbird06 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
well if you ever find something like that IRL you'll have to let me know if it's any good :)
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:iconcocoismynumber1food:
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yes, I shall keep this in the mind
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yandi1123 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Lol pleas MOORRRRREEEEDD!?!?!?!
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:iconbloom02:
Bloom02 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
MOOORRREEEE!!!!please????
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:iconjknagy5:
jknagy5 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*explodes*
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:iconwhenrabbitsattack2-0:
Whenrabbitsattack2-0 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
keeep it goingggggggggggggggggg

or I'll die

legit

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER
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:iconcocoismynumber1food:
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
chap 6 is out :D
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:iconheroinacutesmile:
HeroInACuteSmile Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice!
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:iconcocoismynumber1food:
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
haha thanks x3
Wait till the rest of it
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HeroInACuteSmile Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When is it gonna be ooouuuttt? I'm whining, this is serious! I NEVER whine!
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Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmm, I need a little more brainstorming time, I've ignored my school work long enough xD
At least I got this out xD
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HeroInACuteSmile Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Your right. School work comes first.
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:iconcocoismynumber1food:
Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I move my but as fast as I can x3
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HeroInACuteSmile Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Okay!Thumbs Up 
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